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Last Song

door killea

last song playing in the café
wishing it would never end
just wanting to delay
going home to the empty bed
one more stinger for the road
his words of departure in her head

rain down on me pulsates in her ears
just wanting to suspend the flow
of inevitable shattering tears

friends wondered where he'd gone
she had smiled and shook her head
not wanting to face the reality
their love finally dead
moving to the music
nothing left to be said

too sober to face this day
her emptiness gives way
last song playing in the café


© Killea

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    Mooie liedjes duren niet lang !
    killea: some go on forever, thanks Noel
    xx
    j
  • secret
    Prachtig
    liefs
    killea: Thank you Secret
    xx
    j
  • Magdalena
    ooo June, zuivere melancholie doorleefd weergegeven

    magnifiek!
    XXXX
    killea: Thank you Magdalena love
    xx
    j
  • Ghislaine
    The last post
    killea: Thank yu, Ghislaine
    xx
    j
  • lief
    I know the feeling, the last song and everything turns out to be so wrong...

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: Thank you, Liefie
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    stilmakend gedicht,
    Marc
    xxx
    killea: Thanks, love
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I got the blues for you instead...

    xx
    j
    killea: Ah yes, the blues....
    xx
    j
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