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Nine Wild Horses

door killea

Nine wild horses blocking the path
in the shade of a magical tree
I asked what does this mean
they were all facing away from me
I spoke to them to warn of my approach
so beautiful, as if they were tamed
and as I moved between them
each told how they were named

one for Sorrow
two for Pain
three for Desperation
four for Shame
five for Tears
six for Disdain
seven for Fears
eight for Blame
nine for Insane

such splendour, stillness and silence
encasing man's emotional grief
nine wild horses stood still on my path
I was moved beyond belief
leaving them behind with new insight
turned, just wanted to see
imprint their tranquility on my mind
again they had turned away from me


Killea

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    Meesterlijk, prachtig geschreven, het raakt me diep !
    killea: Thank you, sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    gewoonweg wauw, ben jij paardenfluistraar,
    het blijft een edel dier,
    liefs,
    Marc
    xx
    killea: Thank you darling
    xx
    j
  • secret
    Zo mooi
    intens gevoeld
    liefs
    killea: Thank you, secret
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Mooi hoor , graag gelezen.
    killea: thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • jan
    you can only ride one at the same time, so which one will it be today?

    nice poem!
    xx
    j
    killea: like I'd tell you! xx J
  • miepe
    mooi paardenspel!
    killea: Thank you Miepe
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Who's gonna ride your wild horses?

    Greta xx
    killea: I'll be doing my own riding! thanks Greta
    xx
    j
  • JakobRo
    as always beautifull
    killea: Thank you so much, Jakob
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Pure magic june
    greets
    killea: You are too kind, thank you dddfish
    xx
    j
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