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Three Women, One Too Many

door killea

She loved you so long, left you, left this life
mother of your children, your loving wife
beautiful partner, of so many years
honour her with your tears, tell her of your fears
pay tribute to her for the rest of your days
she blessed you in so many ways

have you any idea how it made me feel
for you it seemed no big deal
telling me you had a longstanding girlfriend
it took me a few moments to completely comprehend
I didn't say anything, not to spoil the evening for us
a night so lovely, didn't want to make a fuss

delete my number, delete my e-mail, you really should,
thought you were still confused, mourning, I understood
then you made it clear, I was just a second one-night-stand
let me tell you how I hurt, while you feel so grand
delete me, and find with your girlfriend your bliss
you and I know, I deserve better than this!

Three women in your life, is one too many
beware, or you'll end up without any

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    I can feel the angry
    killea: thank you, mr. feel between the lines - oops sorry meant to say 'read'
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I always knew that three is a crowd June...

    xx
    j



    killea: Did you really, Jan?
    xx
    j
  • Magdalena
    Saved by the bell Killea?

    Leave that man with that longstanding girlfriend of his. The poor lady has to fight or compete with the idealised image of a dead wife. No one can fight a ghost-deeply-loved. Ghosts are never tired, never wrinkled.
    And the fact that he was lying in your arms...

    poor poor longstandig girlfriend, excuse for a man who is unable to love what is in front of him

    XXXX
    killea: so true, lovely Magdalena
    xx
    j
  • lief
    nothing compares to you, June

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: thank you so much, Liefie
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    a moving poem, you're hurt again, hope you really find your way one time, wisch you a nice weekend,
    M.
    xxx
    killea: thank you darling
    xx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Wat een diepgaand gedicht, als men liefde delen moet is dat een schaduwzijde in het leven een donkere wolk en men hoopt toch ooit de zon weer zien te schijnen.

    Willy
    killea: thank you Willy
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Ik wens je zo erg een mooie lieve tedere man June, ik hoop dat je vind.
    killea: Thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
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