Tonight my spirit is free to roam on your cloud
along the shores of shifting sand
safe and secure, with your shield of honour
protecting my essence held in your hand
your strength, faith and passion binding
my adoration constant, this I vow
I come to you, relinquish any doubt
seeing, hearing, feeling the perfection of now
beloved storm on my horizon, you kiss my brow
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wauw! amazing J.
killea: Thank you, sweetheart
killea: Many thanks, Tessy
a little bit melodramatic but that's you today
killea: That's me babe, mellow and dramatic!
killea: thank you so much, darling Jan
Knap gedicht !
killea: Thank you so much, Noel
perfect!!! till the last one: you kiss my brow
actually this one you could let it go with the storm and finish with:my horizon... the rest leave it to us: interpretation and imagination
killea: thank you for your great FB, ppe
mooi hoor dit stormachtig vers!
killea: Thank you very much, Alie