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Tipsy

door killea

The first wet sand between my toes
beautiful bodies in naked worship of the sun
frolicking in icy surf, happy screams of fun

hand in hand along the boisterous shore
dining outdoors, a bottle of chilled rosť
nothing to spoil this glorious day

later on the terrace of Que Pasa
drinking a Salito or two, too soon
surrendering to a tipsy afternoon

the night will find us on the beach again
glistening in the ocean, the moon above,
a mirror of celestial love

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jamal
    how romantic June!

    strong writing


    xxx
    killea: Thank you, Jamal
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I got the picture June, wish I was there!

    xx
    j
    killea: wish you were too, it would be such fun!
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Knap, zeer graag gelezen.
    killea: Thank you so much Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • ppe
    lovely! I loved this one in particular 'surrendering to a tipsy afternoon'
    killea: Yes, ppe, it was a great day, thank you for lovely FB
    xx
    j
  • miepe
    ow it's such a perfect day -zucht- zou ik duzend keer kunnen opleggen als ik sentimenteel word en terugdenk aan die leuke dag daar...

    Just a perfect day,

    Drink Sangria in the park,

    And then later, when it gets dark,

    We go home.

    Just a perfect day,

    Feed animals in the zoo

    Then later, a movie, too,

    And then home.



    Oh it's such a perfect day,

    I'm glad I spent it with you.

    Oh such a perfect day,

    You just keep me hanging on,

    You just keep me hanging on.


    killea: Fabulous song, Miepe thanks for great FB
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    enjoy the sun and all love J.
    xxx
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Wonderful to read on a day like this!

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
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