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Your Key

door killea

You gave me the key to your lovely house
gave it complete with a pesky mouse
set the garden table with foods so divine
filled my glass with the chilled wine
made me laugh with your smart replies
made me cry when I looked into your eyes
touched me and I was filled with desire
lead me to the burning pyre
made love that took away my breath
watched as I succumbed to die the small death
held me in your arms all through the night
told me everything would be alright
put socks on my feet to keep me warm
you knew how much I loved a storm
as I fastened your key onto my key-ring
your adoration obliterated everything

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • alie_jankind
    mooi sleutelgedicht!
    gardentable is dat niet een woord?

    groeten
    killea: Thank you Alie, and no it is two words
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    wauw, amazing when you get such love!
    M.
    xxx
    killea: thank you sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I hope you made a duplicate?

    xx
    j
    killea: I made one for every member of the family, long lost cousins, friends, friends of friends......
    xx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Blijven dromen hé?
    killea: no, I am all dreamed out
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Mooi gedicht
    killea: thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
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