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Weekend

door killea



Weekend after weekend we do the same
and every time it is different again
just when I think we have mastered the game
we take it up a notch, a tick further we aim

lust for simplicity, captured in a blink
drunk with life, no need to have a drink
your passion takes me over the brink
I faint or whimper as we interlink

three days is all we have to spare
every moment we resplendently share
surpassing all expectations, so rare
I breathe in your breath my energy air

as all good things must come to an end
the days in between much mail is penned
separation so hard to endure or comprehend
until next weekend my mate, my lover, my friend

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ppe
    reading this poem a journey into intimacy
    killea: Thank you so much ppe
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    hope you still do the freaks-meeting
    M.
    x
    killea: Of course darling, looking forward to it.
    xx
    j
  • GoNo2
    Succes hé?
    killea: Thank you Noel
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Mooi June, geniet van je weekends koester ze voor de dagen dat je van elkaar gescheiden bent
    killea: Thank you Tessy, will do
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    I like this poem.

    Greta xx
    killea: Thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I got friday on my mind June!

    xxx
    j
    killea: Me too, Jan
    xx
    j
  • secret
    heerlijk om te lezen
    fijn weekend alvast

    killea: thank you, Secret
    xx
    j
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