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door killea

Weaving a legacy for a legend
scheming on a seduction plan
minds connected across the span
surreptitious woman, dual-named sham
beware in the arena of the second man

sword in the mouth
sharpened and acutely alert
will slit the rhyme and quickly avert
advance and find out how the cut will hurt
Jezabelle of the sleaze and dirt

your voracious hunger will not be stilled
come closer again, dare cross the line
green is a colour of many a chime
all green turns black, given time
black tears will flow for the mortal rhyme

feedback van andere lezers

• jan
  it's still early, but this sounds good to me June!
  
  xx
  j
  killea: Thank you, Jan
  xx
  j
• ivo
  mijn voorgevoel zegt dat het nogal donker is daar .. en ook al spelen de klokken hun lied, een gevecht met schaduwen en die 'niet-zijn' geeft altijd verdriet en tranen omdat voor wat mij betreft alleen het de realiteit is die treft.
  killea: Thank you Ivo, and yes it is dark and threateningly sinister.
  xx
  j
• jack
  Are you sure Jezabelle is spelled correctly? I thought it was just simply Jezebel, in english.
  
  Great writing, as usual. Something to be read out loud in front of an audience!
  killea: Indeed it is written Jezebel, but for my purposes and on purpose I changed the spelling. Thank you for a fine FB.
  xxx
  j
• tessy
  oei June, knap geschreven hoor
  killea: Thank you, Tessy
  xx
  j