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Farewell Tristesse

door killea

Last night I dreamed of a green man
I've seen him before laughing, teasing
skulking around another door
the last time he needed appeasing

face of my addiction fades from memory
the endless nights of mysteries haunt me still
times of madness, chaos and gladness
love misplaced in time and space, the thrill

letting you go was painful and slow
gratitude abounds for the lessons learned
how deeply I loved you will never know
neither how deeply hurt when spurned

floating on dreams, watching them come true
in love deeper than I have ever been before
free of the past, only days of sweet contentment
I see his face clear, light, loving opening his door

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • GoNo2
    Heel mooi !
    killea: Thank you Noel
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    prachtig June, ik heb ervan gesnoept ;-)
    killea: Thank you so much, Tessy
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    it was me oh me oh me oh Lord .. standig in de need op pray
    killea: I'm so pleased you could relate to my poem, Ivo
    xx
    j
  • miepe
    ik vind de titel niet zo, niet zo, niet zo, ... aantrekkelijk

    de rest wel, zeker als er verbetering in zicht is
    ha hi hu h
  • Mistaker
    I really like this poem.

    Greta xx
    killea: thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I just can't enough of your sweet poems June, more, more!

    xx
    j
    killea: Thank you Jan, have you read Genie and Cane Toad II?
    so sweet!
    xx
    j
  • aquaangel
    beauty
    killea: Thank you Angelface
    xx
    j
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