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Drowning

door killea

Can't take my eyes off you
even from a distance
you are all I can see
sleep gives no resistance

gladly drowning in your intensity
I awake to you watching me
wordless communication
tells me what you see

you touch me just in passing
flames of passion ensue
the magic starts all over again
filled with the essence of you

hours of separation
keep me yearning for more
my world so enriched
by the key to your door

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qXwWT2Chx64

feedback van andere lezers

• GoNo2
  Knap!
  killea: thank you, Noel
  xx
  j
• miepe
  ô how naais it is and all that lovelys of love
  
  ggg!
  
  bjoetiefoel agin!
  killea: Oh yes, Miepele
  xxxx
  j
• ivo
  het slepende van de muziek (youtube) samen met het gedicht maakt het een mooi gevoel dat herkenbaar 'lief' is.
  killea: thank you, Ivo
  xx
  j
• jan
  how sweet it is to be in love June,
  
  xx
  j
  killea: Yes, it is soooo sweet, Jan
  xxx
  j
• tessy
  Mooi om getuige te mogen zijn van deze liefde ;-)
  killea: Thank you, Tessy
  xxx
  j
• yellow
  you both, take a cold shower to cool down but be carefull because cold make some things smaller(with man)
  love,
  M.
  x
  killea: No Marc, no cold showers will ever be required if it is up to me!
  ha ha
  xxx
  j
• Mistaker
  Beautiful love...
  
  Greta xx
  killea: thank you Greta
  xx
  j
• klaver4
  a racing heart, searching for breath; drowning is a bit, how should I say it..., for this nice love poem!
  xx
  klaver4
  killea: yes, I should have used the word 'wallowing' but I didn't......
  xxx
  j