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Splinter

door killea

As everything moves forward
looking back makes no more sense
desert caravans on shifting sands
parody of a story too intense
understanding blinded by dust
of spoken particles airborne
in the ether of lost trust
pain, digging out the splinter thorn
cut needs to be deeper yet
barb removed with force
no more devouring recall
no longer any remorse

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ppe
    mooi gedicht
    killea: Thank you ppe
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    aangrijpend mooi ...
    killea: thank you, Ivo
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Nice! Looking back has only one potency. The one that makes you wanne feel miserable...
    killea: thank you, dddfish
    xx
    j
  • silvia
    mooi Killea !
    grts
    killea: Thank you Silvia
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Zo komt Jan Splinter door de winter... ;-)

    Greta xx
    killea: Thanks Greta
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    that's the way but still it's a fight to fall and get up again, at least for me it is, but okay, the change is started, have to look forward, have the feeling you write this for me, in that case, very much thanks,
    Marc

    xxx
    killea: You're very welcome, darling
    xx
    j
  • jan
    superb!

    xx
    j
    killea: Thank you Jan
    xx
    j
  • fairy
    Remorse has no sense, as what happened, is already past and you can't change it anymore. The power of now!

    Great poem!

    Wendy x
    killea: Thank you Wendy
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    graag gelezen
    killea: thank you so much, Tessy
    xx
    j
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