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Incessant Hunger

door killea

No doubt at all you feel so strong
how you make me feel, plays the song
eyes that mirror every move I make
all perils of the game, a risk to take
separation leaves me fully distraught
no need to speak, we feel each thought
you come to me, an ethereal flight
invade my dreams in the endless night
incessant hunger a lover's plight

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Ivan
    Isnd't that lovely ???
    oh, oh, oh, Kilea becarefull love
    regards Ivan
    killea: Thank you, Ivan
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    of hoe het mooie overweldigd?
    killea: Indeed, Ivo
    xx
    j
  • elpe
    om veriefd op te worden.
    killea: Thank you Elpe
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Herkenbaar June, knap geschreven.
    killea: Thank you, Tessy
    xx
    j
  • Zingendevleugel
    om verliefd te blijven prachtig!xxx
    killea: thank you Diana
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    It's your eulogy to the ethereal game between the eternal grass and the wind that set fire on the beginning of time. Impressive as always june
    greets
    killea: Many thanks, dddfish
    xx
    j
  • ppe
    love the title
    killea: many thanks, ppe
    xx
    j
  • martine
    prachtig schrijven
    killea: many thanks, martine
    xx
    j
  • jan
    superbeautiful June!
    xxx
    j

    killea: many thanks, Jan
    xx
    j
  • jamal
    I feel what you're feeling and that makes two of us...sorry four

    you are for sure a strong feeling-writer, if this is correct English
    the writing comes from the hart, not from the pen


    xxx
    killea: indeed it does, Jamal
    xx
    j
  • anne
    Ik ben jaloers op je engelse taalvaardigheid killea, lovely!
    killea: en ik op je Nederlands, lief
    xx
    j
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