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Angel of Death

door killea

In your presence so many have died
in your arms they lay, you cried
so many succumbed to suicide
endless sorrow, fate took your bride

looks of an angel when you were a child
hiding the destiny, veiling the wild
beautiful face, by many beguiled
now lined with grief earned, compiled

grabbed life whole, out of control
leader of men, you found a goal
a stranger's war, undercover patrol
injuries, a medal, much later parole

all the time you were trying
keeper of souls, they kept dying
everyone you loved, no denying
Angel of Death I am defying

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • martine
    stilletjes van je schrijven
    killea: many thanks, Martine
    xx
    j
  • ppe
    sterke afsluiter
    killea: Thank you, ppe
    xx
    j
  • jamal
    wauw June.....the one we'll all meet, someday

    xxx
    killea: thank you, Jamal
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    oeps, wel sterk en heel knap neergezet ...
    de engel van de dood tarten, haha mooi gezet ..
    killea: Thank you, Ivo
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Mooi June
    killea: Many thanks, Tessy
    xx
    j
  • marrik
    See myself in this sweet angel.

    HAHA
    killea: Yes, you are a very sweet angel, with a very very rusty halo!
    xx
    j
  • Jurgje
    This is pretty stunning. Love the pathos! Where's the theme come from? Fondly, J
    killea: Many thanks, Jurgen
    xx
    j
  • jack
    Slayer (the band) has a song with this title as well. Hell yeah!
    killea: Many thanks, Jack
    xx
    j
  • secret
    wauw
    killea: many thanks, Secret
    xx
    j
  • jan
    without words..
    xx
    j



    killea: Thank you, Jan
    xx
    j
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