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The Inner Child

door killea

She said, don't cry child
don't curl up and hide
they called you ugly
but it is not true
your second mother
one day will tell you
how beautiful you are

dry your tears
you will survive
all your fears
they took your innocence
in the early years
you have reason to be sad
but life will make you glad

do not weep
into your pillow
a blessed hand
saved you from
a death well planned
one day, one day
you will dance barefoot
in the warm sand

I hear you wailing
little girl so lost
the price you pay
dearly it will cost
let me embrace you
don't go into the frost
let my love your heart emboss

as the child slowly disappeared
into the world of her own
she called to her
in dimensions unknown
she reached out her hand
back, into another time zone
but the girl who she was
had left her alone

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ivo
    intens droevig hoopvol mooi
    killea: many thanks, Ivo
    xx
    j
  • Liesje
    heel mooi... doet me denken aan het gepest worden als kind, maar ondertussen is er inderdaad een andere tijd gekomen... triest en toch zo hoopvol!
    killea: thank you Liesje
    xx
    j
  • jan
    superbeautiful!
    xx
    j
    killea: thank you for your grand FB, Jan
    xxx
    j
  • martine
    ........
    zo stilmakend voor mij
    mooie avond
    xx
    killea: thank you so much, martine
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    ademloos gelezen.
    killea: many thanks, Tessy
    xx
    j
  • anne
    It breaks my heart too killea, touching deeply, all those children who does not deserve all those misery, and it makes me thinking of the orphens in Roemenie and other places. Very strong poem, one of the better you wrote I find personally!
    killea: Thank you for your fine FB, Anne
    xxx
    j
  • Zingendevleugel
    ik ben er van onder de indruk heel mooi! xxxx
    killea: Many thanks, Diana
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    this is so amazing, i'm not joking, if you give permission, I gonna translate it and put it on freaks for my own, just changing the word 'girl' in boy and it is like it should be about me. You know,
    a few days ago some girl(you know who)called me ugly too, she even said I look like a vampire, now I had it with her,
    just wauw...

    it's fantastic
    M.
    x
    killea: of course you may, sweetheart I am honoured you like it so much
    xxx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    intens mooi gedicht!!
    dat weet te raken

    groeten
    killea: Appreciate your fine FB, Alie
    many thanks
    xx
    j
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