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Teardrop

door killea




Beside the sea on a moonlit night
when life should have been full of delight
a child shed painful tears
of anguish, unspeakable fears
a teardrop fell into the ebb and flow
to ride the waters of eternal woe

a man, he seldom cried anymore
though lost in his internal war
his Weltschmerz gripped his soul
unfulfilled desires burned
like smouldering coal
a raindrop fell upon his face
prompting what time could not erase

silently he wept again
tears united with the pouring rain
he cried for then and what is now
hard earned furrows on his brow
yet by life's grace, he was no longer alone
she took his hand and led him home

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • martine
    een sterk dicht
    xxx
    killea: Many thanks, Martine
    xx
    j
  • Zingendevleugel
    een heel diep mooie zee gedicht vol
    subliem!
    killea: Thank you, Diana
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    The boat that I row...

    Beautiful poem June!

    Greta xx
    killea: Thanks, Greta
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Heel erg mooi
    killea: many thanks, Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    I LOVE YOU JUNE!

    amazing how your words, piece for piece, led me...

    I'm glad I've visit you today
    (not always possible, how much I want to)


    xxx
    killea: You are too kind, many thanks for coming along Jamal
    xx
    j
  • ppe
    sterk!
    killea: many thanks, ppe
    xx
    j
  • Liesje
    een pareltje!
    killea: many thanks, Liesje
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    een zeer mooie traandruppel op mijn scherm schittert helder ...
    killea: thank you, Ivo
    xx
    j
  • jan
    this teardrop made me happy June!
    xxx
    j


    killea: that makes me happy, Jan
    xxx
    j
  • Magdalena
    weeral: magnifiek June!
    killea: Thank you, sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • yellow
    prachtige kunst noem ik dit, zoveel inhoud,
    M.
    x
    killea: thank you love
    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    Ook al met de tranen die raken ...
    de eerste en laatste strofe vind ik het mooiste,
    best leesbaar

    groeten
    killea: thank you, alie
    xx
    j
  • klaver4
    that's what i've wrote about in my poem 'Dat ik oprecht van jou hou'.
    if anything, when somebody that normally does not cry in the presence of other people, does so in your presence, that is a truth and bone vote of absolute confidence; and that's very moving. When that happens to me, being the receiving part of that communication, I'm always overwelmed then, and can only hold my own tears if I know that it will not help that person.
    That's what I read here! Moving June!
    xxx
    klaver4

    killea: I am overwhelmed by your beautiful FB, Dicky
    many thanks
    love
    June
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