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Let in the Fog

door killea


Open the windows let in the fog
let it mingle with the confusion inside
never mind we can't see or hear
there is no place to hide
words written or spoken
will leave a permanent imprint
a taste of bitterness on the tongue
a vague and greyish tint
open the door let in the fog
it's yearning for a friend
let it merge and take the chaos
maybe then we'll comprehend
the triggers that scream warning
misunderstanding, bewilderment
like the gut felt recognition
of a well-known once loved scent

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ivo
    schitterend mooi Kilea ..
    killea: many thanks, Ivo
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    some time ago I saw two swans swimming in the fog, they glide very peacefull through the water, beautiful like your poem!

    grtzz
    killea: thank you Jan
    xxx
    j
  • Liesje
    indeed, let in the fog... mooi!
    killea: many thanks, Liesje
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    erg mooi
    killea: Thank you, Tessy
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    there is no place to hide...
    prachtig J.
    xxx
    killea: thank you Marc
    xxx
    j
  • lief
    superbeautiful June!
    xxx
    liefs
    killea: thank you lief love
    xx
    j
  • Magdalena
    My dear, jij bent toch begaafd +++++!!!!
    killea: You are too generous, darling
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    I hate fog but love this poem.

    Greta xx
    killea: many thanks, Greta
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    a beauty June!! you keep amazing me, time after time

    xxx
    killea: Thank you so much, Jamal
    xx
    j
  • klaver4
    just have to say that I love the last lines of this poem for scent-memories are very dear to me!!! I live by them - and I keep on smoking because otherwise they just would be too overwelming!
    But must say the poem has a very sad ring to it, taking into account the 'once' in the last sentence. It has a ring to it that makes you think that scent now triggers different awckward memories.
    Hope all's well with you (which I think is the case, since you've been writing less and been living more...;o)
    xxx
    dicky
    killea: You know me so well, Dicky
    xx
    j
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