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Soul Hunter

door killea

I love you in black
love the you in me
in the castle, in the shack
black shades cover black eyes
your laughter
comes as no surprise

soul hunter in disguise
you have my body
you own my demise

baby, you do for me
I wander in your world
the miracles I see,
feel, splayed open, universe unfurled
cosmic noise, music in my ear
you rock my being
you take my fear

crazy for your touch
every moment a new sign
you captured my soul
for the last time
Gaucho, means nothing, and so much
purple tears flow
I succumb to destiny
I let go

soul hunter I see in your eyes
you took my mind
you own my skies

so smart
clever sniper when not looking
you hit bulls-eye into my heart

put it away
only keep your gun to distract
those who wish to ruin our way

hurricane
storm in my life, rain on me
it will never be the same again

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Zingendevleugel
    I love love love
    mooi mooi mooi!
    ster van een gedicht xxxx
    killea: thank you sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    prachtig
    killea: many thanks, Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • ppe

    gedicht spreekt voor zich dus ik zou 'soul hunter' een aantal keren weglaten in het begin van de strofen

    mooi
    killea: many thanks ppe, have taken your advice.
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    nice to know you are doing well June,

    xxx
    j
    killea: thank you Jan
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    prachtig hoe liefde zich uit ...
    killea: Many thanks, Ivo
    xx
    j
  • Mephistopheles
    Long time I read you, darling. Your writing still rocks the cradle, June.
    killea: Thank you Bert
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    The heart is a lonely hunter...
    Beautiful poem June!

    Greta xx
    killea: thank you Greta
    xx
    j
  • Magdalena
    love love love!
    so happy for you
    mighty writing as always dear June
    xxxxx

    Bye the way: het lukt mij niet om jouw boek via internet te kopen. Kom je binnenkort ergens life?
    killea: Many thanks, Magdalena
    xx
    j
  • Klaver4
    Yiehaaa!
    Put the pedal to the metal, I would say! Keep on trucking!
    Mighty glad for ya!
    Great poem June
    xx
    dicky
    killea: Thank you Dicky
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    Is this a lovesong Killea?
    love,
    M.
    killea: Indeed, Marc
    xx
    j
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