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Soul Hunter
I love you in black
love the you in me
in the castle, in the shack
black shades cover black eyes
your laughter
comes as no surprise
soul hunter in disguise
you have my body
you own my demise
baby, you do for me
I wander in your world
the miracles I see,
feel, splayed open, universe unfurled
cosmic noise, music in my ear
you rock my being
you take my fear
crazy for your touch
every moment a new sign
you captured my soul
for the last time
Gaucho, means nothing, and so much
purple tears flow
I succumb to destiny
I let go
soul hunter I see in your eyes
you took my mind
you own my skies
so smart
clever sniper when not looking
you hit bulls-eye into my heart
put it away
only keep your gun to distract
those who wish to ruin our way
hurricane
storm in my life, rain on me
it will never be the same again
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I love love love
mooi mooi mooi!
ster van een gedicht xxxx
killea: thank you sweetheart
xxx
j - tessy
prachtig
killea: many thanks, Tessy
xxx
j - ppe
gedicht spreekt voor zich dus ik zou 'soul hunter' een aantal keren weglaten in het begin van de strofen
mooi
killea: many thanks ppe, have taken your advice.
xxx
j - jan
nice to know you are doing well June,
xxx
j
killea: thank you Jan
xx
j - ivo
prachtig hoe liefde zich uit ...
killea: Many thanks, Ivo
xx
j - Mephistopheles
Long time I read you, darling. Your writing still rocks the cradle, June.
killea: Thank you Bert
xx
j - Mistaker
The heart is a lonely hunter...
Beautiful poem June!
Greta xx
killea: thank you Greta
xx
j - Magdalena
love love love!
so happy for you
mighty writing as always dear June
xxxxx
Bye the way: het lukt mij niet om jouw boek via internet te kopen. Kom je binnenkort ergens life?
killea: Many thanks, Magdalena
xx
j - Klaver4
Yiehaaa!
Put the pedal to the metal, I would say! Keep on trucking!
Mighty glad for ya!
Great poem June
xx
dicky
killea: Thank you Dicky
xx
j - yellow
Is this a lovesong Killea?
love,
M.
killea: Indeed, Marc
xx
j
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