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Fiddlesticks

door killea

Out of darkness into light
he wears a mask to delight
and everyone listens to the flute
the lying tunes of a vicious brute
out of the light and into the dark
they clap their hands to hear the dog bark
he charms them with his musical tricks
he is the master Fiddlesticks
horns so sharp - violin merciless
his pleasure lies in causing distress
denigration he formulates so fine
beware you are not the next in line
clap, clap, clap, the evil tongue clicks
he is the master Fiddlesticks

feedback van andere lezers

• ppe
  for a moment i thought of Fiddler on the roof :)
  
  nice poem
  killea: many thanks ppe
  xx
  j
• alie_jankind
  mooie associatie van ppe ...
  graag je vers gelezen!!
  
  groeten
  killea: thank you Alie
  xx
  j
• ivo
  schitterend
  killea: Thank you Ivo
  xx
  j
• jan
  very weird this poem!
  xxx
  j
  
  killea: Weird is my middle name darling, thank you
  xx
  j
• martine
  zo mooi je schrijven
  liefs
  killea: Thanks Martine
  xx
  j
• Mistaker
  I like it!
  
  Greta xx
  killea: Thank you Greta
  xx
  j
• Magdalena
  heb dit meerdere keren moeten lezen deze keer
  
  Killea, dit is misschien oerdom, maar 'clap clap clap' is voor mij niet te rijmen (in mijn kop) met het clicken van die evil tongue
  'click click click' zou veel beter in mijn geestesoor klinken, maar is dan weer een overdaad in dit gedicht
  
  dikke knuffel!
  killea: Thank you magdalena
  people clap, clap, clap while the evil tongue clicks
  he is the Master Fiddlesticks
  
  xx
  j
• Liesje
  beautiful to read and to read again...
  killea: Many thanks, Liesje
  xx
  j
• Klaver4
  very sharp! Guess he will have more than diserved this poem the bastard ;o)
  xx
  klaver4
  killea: Indeed a bastard!
  xx
  j
• yellow
  the devil is everywhere, and it's like you feel him,
  M.
  x
  killea: thank you, sweetheart
  xx
  j