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Let's dance

door killea



Guided by a gossamer thread
I wander along the chosen way
softly, softly is my tread
in gratitude I begin each day

on the pillow next to me
your smiling watchful face
knowing eyes deeply see
feel the benevolent grace

life may not have been
the expected party perchance
leaving behind what we have seen
from here on we will dance

despite your two left feet
my hopeless coordination
on the dance floor we meet
our tango a small sensation

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • ivo
    een mooie dans tussen twee harten en een liefde die niet stuk gaat ..
    killea: Thank you, Ivo
    xx
    j
  • fairy
    Waauw, June, this is really a very nice one, indeed. It reminds me of a song from the musical "Wicked", Dancing through life.

    At this moment me and Olivier are traveling through Ireland with his motorbike and I just feel the same way as you are discribing in your poem.

    Wendy x
    killea: Thank you Wendy. Have a wonderful holiday and if you pass through Killea give the ground a kiss!
    xx
    j
  • martine
    mooi dicht terug killea
    xx
    killea: Many thanks, Martine
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Dancing the night away!

    Greta xx
    killea: thanks, Greta
    xx
    j
  • jamal
    over kleuren en smaken discussieert men niet
    en over het dansen ook niet...het is het gevoel dat telt.

    xxx
    killea: thank you Jamal
    xx
    j
  • Liesje
    Prachtig en gevoelig neergepend!
    killea: thanks Liesje
    xx
    j
  • Klaver4
    haha, nice ending June! Beautiful poem! It's not passed chances or lives that count; it's what you do with what's ahead hey!
    xxx
    dicky
    killea: many thanks, Dicky
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    tango or samba, it's let me think at patrick swayze,
    strong poem J.
    M.x
    killea: may he rest in peace
    xx
    j
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