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The Devil May Care

door killea

searching for you
in all the wrong places
dawn breaks me down
you have all the aces
seems so long ago
since we touched bases

the aura of trouble
will slowly dissipate
insight ahead
a new quality date
tremendous expectations
it must be fate

as the veil lifts
it gives relief
to know steadfast
hang on to belief
alone and sturdy
defeat the grief

couldn't find you
looked everywhere
hunted my memories
but you were not there
search called off
the devil may care


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5G8z8LM65jM

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • klaver4
    mmm
    strange poem, and this on a Tuesday night already ;o)!
    ps: I was wondering, second verse, in sight ahead..; perhaps either in sight, ahead or insight ahead? Don't know, maybe just the ramblings of an aging nutcase...;o)
    But it stopped me reading, so that's why I lay it before you, the almighty native Judge Juny :o)
    xxx
    Dicky

    killea: nutcase? welcome to the club
    xxxj
  • Magdalena
    heel erg mooi en intens Killea
    killea: thank you Karine
    xx
    j
  • ivo
    mooi en intens idd hopelijk vindt je wie je zoekt
    killea: will keep looking, thank you Ivo
    xx
    j
  • martine
    vol emotie
    prachtig
    killea: thank you Martine
    xx
    j
  • Liesje
    emotievol en origineel neergepend!
    killea: thank you Liesje
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    prachtig June
    killea: Many thanks Tessy
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    The devil is a man of wealth and taste!

    I like this poem very much, there's some mystery between the lines. Great song too.

    Greta xx
    killea: thanks Greta
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    fire in your soul Killea?
    love,
    M.
    killea: always Marc
    xx
    j
  • jan
    nice poem but I can't get to the link..

    xxx
    j
    killea: What a shame, I think you would have loved it
    xx
    j
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