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Winds of Change
When the winds of change
whip you up like a leaf
the ensuing turmoil
unmasks many a thief
desecraters, manipulators
robbing peace of mind
delusional spectators
of the most nefarious kind
like grains of sand
in the wayward breeze
they fall long before
you land with ease
directions not needed
a new moon will glow
illuminating the place
where new roots will grow
feedback van andere lezers- Magdalena
waaauw! Dat is een mooie!
killea: Thank you sweetheart
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j - jan
keep on growing!
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j
killea: Thanks love
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j - Jurgje
It's pretty strong both in imagery and ideas. I'd lose words like 'faith', 'go with the flow' because they're so overused they're all but obsolete. Fondly, J
killea: have lost them, thanks for fine FB Jurgen
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j - Liesje
sterk neergepend!
killea: thank you Liesje
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j - alie_jankind
de wind van verandering, wat een mooi thema
prachtig van inhoud,
misschien nog even naar de regels zien,
het leest niet even vlot (hardop)
Of ligt dat aan mij?
groetjes
killea: thank you Alie
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j - ivo
een zeer mooi gedachte ... ik geniet hiervan
killea: many thanks Ivo
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j - Klaver4
knap !
nice!
Makes me think about the text from a poem/story that I can't remember right now; i'll get back to you on this!
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Dicky
killea: Thank you, Dicky look forward to it
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j - yellow
it's a lovely song too,
xxx
killea: Thank you Marc
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j
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