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Unseen

door killea



Through the labyrinth
of your exposed collage
dark pictures interspersed
spurts of colour discharge
here and there, only brief
for moments in time
life assigned you a lemon
you sucked it like a sweet lime
the man you could have been
cannot reach the man you are
journey to now, remains unseen
standing worthy, strong and lean

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Zingendevleugel
    sweet mooi liefs xxxx
    killea: thank you Diana
    xx
    j
  • Liesje
    the man you could have been
    cannot reach the man you are
    ...
    dit is zo veelzeggend!
    killea: indeed it is Liesje
    xx
    j
  • jan
    superbeautiful!
    xx
    j
    killea: Thank you Jan
    xx
    j
  • anne
    Very nice poem killea, and every man sometimes dreams to be different, but it can take a lot of time to realise this. Greatings, anne.
    killea: many thanks Anne
    xx
    j
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