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Separation

door killea

Separation does not become us
no matter how hard we try
convincing ourselves this is okay
every time I leave, every goodbye
gets harder distorting reality
watch you walk away in rear view mirror
the pining starts all over again
absurd, nothing is any clearer

the lengthy days fly by
a trance-like stupor prevails
bridge the longing
with endless mails
filled with yearning
life seems on hold each day
until I pack my bags
to head your way

home again, reaching for you
there is no disconnection
see myself elevated, adored
in your loving reflection
your dark eyes watch
I fall asleep in your firm hold
your body always so warm
my feet always so cold

the lengthy days fly by
elation of life without fuss
until I pack my bags again
separation does not become us………

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • yellow
    I wish you always had warm feet,
    M.
    xxx
    killea: So do I Marc, thank you
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    the longing for love is the better part of separation;-)
    superbeautiful!
    xx
    j

    killea: the only good part, Jan
    xx
    j
  • JakobRo
    i follow Jan in his comment.

    xx
    J
    killea: thank you Jakob
    xx
    j
  • LilyMayParker
    very moving Killea
    liefs
    Nathalie
    killea: thank you Nathalie
    xxx
    j
  • ivo
    het individu in relatie met anderen is mi altijd wat ambivalent
    killea: indeed it is Ivo
    xx
    j
  • Liesje
    emotioneel sterk neergepend!
    killea: thank you Liesje
    xx
    j
  • Zingendevleugel
    super ster zo mooi xxx
    killea: thank you so much, sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • jamal
    sometimes we know better but our heart always resists to follow...

    very beautiful June. I know you have made a distance up on today.

    xxx
    killea: many thanks Jamal
    xx
    j
  • ppe
    beautiful!
    killea: thank you ppe
    xx
    j
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