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The Unknown
Holding on by the thinnest thread
knowing this time too will pass
flowers in the meadow sleep
but not the snake in the grass
windows open where doors have closed
it's cold, shiver in the ensuing draught
trepidation of what is yet to come
heard the echo as life laughed
miss you courage, as I miss you friend
your perspectives of the zone
your distant succour I feel, reaching
as I lie, defeated, prone
take heart in your paradigms
step by step into the unknown
feedback van andere lezers- ivo
dit gaat zeker heel diep, amai killea: thank you Ivo
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j - yellow
vertwijfelend zoek je de warmte op, ik wens je de mooiste en beste keuzes toe in die stappen naar wat je nog niet weet,
M.
x killea: many thanks, Marc
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j - elfi
I like this very much! killea: many thanks Elfi
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j - ppe
er zitten een aantal prachtige verzen tussen killea: thank you ppe
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j - manono
Prachtig! killea: thank you Manono
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j - Liesje
bijzonder in zijn gevoeligheid! killea: thank you Liesje
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j - alie_jankind
Wat een mooi bewogen gedicht
groeten killea: many thanks Alie
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j - LilyMayParker
Kippenvelmomentje Killea, prachtig
liefs
Nathalie
xxx killea: Many thanks Nathalie
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j - JakobRo
more than beautiful
grasping killea: many thanks Jakob
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j - KapiteinSeBBos
sense and sensibility bij wh!
killea: thank you
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j
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