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Life's covenant
rain reflecting tearful flows
life's covenant, who knows
everyone has a story to tell
of a personal earthbound hell
lost in a mirror's wicked distortion
depth of fears all out of proportion
behind a mask of wistful smiles
hidden, unrelenting trials
no day is ever the same
a bullet wears your name
feedback van andere lezers- drebddronefish
Hell on earth! You're a master in depicting those gloomy dark scenes!
greets
killea: many thanks for the compliment manuel
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j - ivo
het leven van elke mens is een mijnenveld waarin zowel geluk als leed deel uitmaakt
killea: so it is, Ivo
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j - manono
Prachtig!
killea: thank you so much Christine
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j - Liesje
Bij het lezen van jouw gedicht, komt het beeld van een piërot me voor ogen... Sterk gedicht Killea!
killea: thank you Liesje
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j - elfi
I like this poem!
killea: many thanks elfi
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j - klaver4
This is a poem, not wrapped in velvet but in concrete...
Strange to discover I've used a similar phrasing, distorte.., in a poem that came straight out of my soul this evening, after a meeting with an old and dear friend, who is facing a same predicament as I, with some added mistifyning parameters.
I feel this to be an unhappy poem, and it touches me!
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Dicky
killea: appreciate your fine FB Dicky
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j - yellow
een kogel draagt jouw naam, sterk!
x
killea: thank you Marc
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j - jan
when the lady writes...
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j
killea: thanks Jan
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j - KapiteinSeBBos
nice poem
killea: Thank you
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j
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