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Half
When half is missing
the other half is lost
in dreams of the reunion
to be found at any cost
half moon seeks the full
setting sun chases the rise
half-written stories search
for an ending to surprise
half the week stretches out
to the half when we meet
and the half of me I left behind
will again be complete
feedback van andere lezers- hettie35
Heel erg mooi om te lezen,
groetjes Hettie killea: thank you Hettie
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j - Mistaker
Very nice poem June!
Greta xx killea: thank you Greta
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j - ivo
idd zeer mooi june .. killea: thanks Ivo
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j - julien_maleur
I like this poem. I understand it is about the lost of a lover, the desire to love again and the happiness because you met someone new .
JM killea: thank you Julien
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j - alie_jankind
mooi beeld zet je hier neer
groeten killea: thank you Alie
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j - marrik
Nice com. from Maurice HAHAHA
Niet voor de helft gelezen.
M killea: pants on fire!
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j - miepe
(ai verbinding was weer weg, pfff)
I'll traai again
this is nothing but the troeth, june
een heel mooi stuk-uit-één-stuk stuk!
yes, june, i mean it killea: thank you Hilde
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j - jan
very true!
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j killea: thank you jan
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j - Liesje
bijzondere gedachte! killea: thanks Liesje
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