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I keep falling…

door killea

Brick walls, rooms tiled in sorrow
each a different hue of blue
memories paved with history
so many bridges burned with adieu
gave you the easy choice to go
waited for you in the café
you came resolute with tear-filled eyes
in your arms a red rose bouquet
when I fall apart you make love to me
an erotic, emotional ascent
when you go, as you must
I plunge into abysmal lament
you break down my walls
melt away my lingering pain
and I keep falling in love with you
over and over again

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sB8G_e4GHqg

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    coming down like this don't hurt much,

    lovely poem June!

    grtzz
    killea: Thank you Jan
    xxx
    j
  • JakobRo
    lovely June
    killea: thank you Jakob
    xx
    j
  • fairy
    Nice one, it seems as someone is standing there to catch you when you fall ;-)

    Wendy x
    killea: thank you Wendy, sorry for the name confusion! Will never call you 'anything'...
    xx
    j
  • manono
    I particularly like : 'so many bridges burned with adieu'
    killea: many thanks Christine
    xx
    j
  • LilyMayParker
    very strong writing dear June
    love
    Nathalie
    xxx
    killea: thank you sweetness
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    stilmakend
    killea: many thanks Tessy
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Sterk neer gezet,
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: thank you Hettie
    xx
    j
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