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I keep falling…
Brick walls, rooms tiled in sorrow
each a different hue of blue
memories paved with history
so many bridges burned with adieu
gave you the easy choice to go
waited for you in the café
you came resolute with tear-filled eyes
in your arms a red rose bouquet
when I fall apart you make love to me
an erotic, emotional ascent
when you go, as you must
I plunge into abysmal lament
you break down my walls
melt away my lingering pain
and I keep falling in love with you
over and over again
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sB8G_e4GHqg
feedback van andere lezers- jan
coming down like this don't hurt much,
lovely poem June!
grtzz killea: Thank you Jan
xxx
j - JakobRo
lovely June killea: thank you Jakob
xx
j - fairy
Nice one, it seems as someone is standing there to catch you when you fall ;-)
Wendy x killea: thank you Wendy, sorry for the name confusion! Will never call you 'anything'...
xx
j - manono
I particularly like : 'so many bridges burned with adieu' killea: many thanks Christine
xx
j - LilyMayParker
very strong writing dear June
love
Nathalie
xxx killea: thank you sweetness
xx
j - tessy
stilmakend killea: many thanks Tessy
xx
j - hettie35
Sterk neer gezet,
groetjes Hettie killea: thank you Hettie
xx
j
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