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Sometimes

door killea

Sometimes everything so clear
feels so right, so graspable
intense, real, tangible
nothing else matters

moments of perfection
unsullied, authentic
divine with lucidity
then all just shatters

past overtakes the present
presenting an illusion
subtle stealth to disturb
page titled today in tatters

sometimes everything so muddy
untruths sold, readily bought
surface to perturb, alarm bells ring
significance continuously chatters

and everything matters……

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • manono
    Precious moments are to be cherished. Theny never last very long...
    killea: so true Christine, thank you
    xx
    j
  • anne
    Taken out of life, how is your child making it? Everything alright now? I hope so, nice poem.
    killea: Thank you Anne, my daughter is learning all about it, how to manage it whilst getting other opinions. So yes, she is doing alright under the circumstances. Many thanks for asking, sweetness.
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Graag gelezen
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: thank you Hettie
    xx
    j
  • Ghislaine
    Nice poem.
    killea: many thanks Ghislaine
    xx
    j
  • jan
    hold on tight to your dream
    xxx
    j
    killea: holding on, Jan, just holding on
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Mooi !
    killea: many thanks Tessy
    xx
    j
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