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Betere leesbaarheid

Desideratum

door killea

a dream merges with reality
the fog lifting to a curtain call
the players, bowing to the crowd
another life to enthral
reveries thrown to the stars
visions of what may be true
never thought I would find
someone like you

dark sadness evolved
aspirations, desires burning
sent a code with a dove
of unfulfilled yearning
message in a bottle
though long overdue
reached the shores
was found by you

in the centre of my being
no significance can be found
but you, my sky, and stars
fundament of my ground
my home, my peace
the music in my ears
life-force of my body
collector of my tears

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • tessy
    Om zo beeldend te kunnen schrijven als jij ga ik nog veel lessen moeten nemen June.

    xx
    killea: many thanks Tessy
    xx
    j
  • manono
    Beatiful!

    Especially 'collector of my tears'!
    killea: many thanks Christine
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I wonder where I will find my message in a bottle one day...

    very nice poem!

    xxx
    j
    killea: sent you one a year ago, got a reply in Chinese from Shanghai....
    xxx
    j
  • hettie35
    Ik sluit mij geheel bij Tessy aan,
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie
    xx
    j
  • Hazen
    Sigh - feels good to read ya' again. Just great! Thanks, Killea!! xx
    killea: thank you for reading...
    xx
    j
  • lief
    superbeautiful June

    xxx
    liefs
    killea: thank you Lief darling
    xx
    j
  • Mistaker
    A magnificent poem!

    Greta xx
    killea: many thanks Greta
    xxx
    j
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