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The Joker

door killea

He says he's just a teaser
a joker and a pleaser
this time it wasn't too smart
a joke too far, too tart
she is angry, she doesn't buy it
on a level so deep, so quiet
to smoulder, grow as she smiles
visually packing, eating the miles
joker not laughing now
goodbye frown on brow

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • silvia
    he laughed too long and too hard, it seems !
    nice poem Killea !
    grts
    killea: thank you Silvia
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Heel erg mooi Killea,
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: thank you Hettie
    xx
    j
  • jan
    i'd like to teasy sometimes ;-))
    xxx
    j

    killea: you are a big tease, jan
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Knap hoor
    killea: thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • klaver4
    hope this an old poem beacuse it has a feirce bite! A joke that's not appreciated says quite a lot about disconnection between the teller and the audience (read: who the joke was on), and the aftermath even more!
    xxx
    dicky
    killea: No Dicky, it is a new poem.......if I ever do bite, it won't be a nibble
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    It's part of the game, I guess.
    killea: thank you Christine
    xx
    j
  • martine
    bijzonder mooi terug killea
    xxx
    killea: many thanks Martine
    xx
    j
  • Lucky
    maf he
    moest meteen aan Steve Miller denken
    killea: many thanks Lucky
    xx
    j
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