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The Joker

door killea

He says he's just a teaser
a joker and a pleaser
this time it wasn't too smart
a joke too far, too tart
she is angry, she doesn't buy it
on a level so deep, so quiet
to smoulder, grow as she smiles
visually packing, eating the miles
joker not laughing now
goodbye frown on brow

feedback van andere lezers

• silvia
  he laughed too long and too hard, it seems !
  nice poem Killea !
  grts
  killea: thank you Silvia
  xx
  j
• hettie35
  Heel erg mooi Killea,
  groetjes Hettie
  killea: thank you Hettie
  xx
  j
• jan
  i'd like to teasy sometimes ;-))
  xxx
  j
  
  killea: you are a big tease, jan
  xx
  j
• tessy
  Knap hoor
  killea: thank you Tessy
  xx
  j
• klaver4
  hope this an old poem beacuse it has a feirce bite! A joke that's not appreciated says quite a lot about disconnection between the teller and the audience (read: who the joke was on), and the aftermath even more!
  xxx
  dicky
  killea: No Dicky, it is a new poem.......if I ever do bite, it won't be a nibble
  xxx
  j
• manono
  It's part of the game, I guess.
  killea: thank you Christine
  xx
  j
• martine
  bijzonder mooi terug killea
  xxx
  killea: many thanks Martine
  xx
  j
• Lucky
  maf he
  moest meteen aan Steve Miller denken
  killea: many thanks Lucky
  xx
  j