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A shot in the dark

door killea

dreams disturbing
messages perturbing
towering torments lunge
hours absorbed, a sponge
sniper flirting with the stars
viper bleeding open scars
floundering in revelation
desperate re-calibration
black mirror sucking in
sad sighs of the violin
storms all passed through
again seeking out the blue
gunshot reaches its mark
finding the essence in the dark
puzzle piece turned around
jigsaw complete, true, profound

feedback van andere lezers

• Mistaker
  We were like interlocking pieces in the Jigsaw puzzle of life...
  
  Greta xx
  
  killea: a perfect fit Greta
  xx
  j
• hettie35
  Ik sluit mij geheel bij Greta aan,
  groetjes Hettie
  killea: Thank you sweetheart
  xx
  j
• manono
  Strong poem, Killea, with a lot of action in it, even a story.
  
  Sometimes it takes a lot to complete the puzzle
  killea: it does indeed, Christine
  xx
  j
• tessy
  Als de puzzel in elkaar past komt het hele beeld te voorschijn en dan pas ziet men of het al die moeite waard was.
  killea: you are so right Tessy
  xxx
  j
• marrik
  Well done missy
  
  M
  killea: Thank you darling - will mail you regarding legal battle
  xx
  j