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Blue Violets

door killea



understanding
complex yet undemanding

time to show not tell
silence of the wishing well

days of sheer elation
give way
to tears of separation

as the wind leads the way
emotional disarray

blue violet bouquet

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Hoeselaar
    Van dit blauwe boeketje wordt je stil

    Willy
    killea: der Strauß hat sehr tiefe Bedeutung Willy
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    So sweet!
    xx Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Doet me aan een liedje denken, erg mooi J.
    killea: thank you tessy
    xx
    j
  • kerima_ellouise
    the violin of violets blues the soul in stillness, longing to feel the other soul, so nearby...

    mooi!mooi!

    groetekes
    killea: thank you Kerima Ellouise
    xx
    j
  • jan
    they're all around the place, nice poem June!

    grtzz
    killea: thank you Jan
    xxx
    j
  • klaver4
    if it's not the physical you can't bear, then there are plenty solutions these days; and if they don't work, if you like driving...;o)
    Like the second verse; actions do speak louder than words (dissapointments often come from not accepting the given that actions in the past are the best foretellers of actions to come... (Gordon Livingston).
    xxx
    dicky
    killea: Exactly my philosophy (at least until proven wrong). It's a bit of a battle. As for driving - yes I do like it very much, when it is along the water, through the polders etc.
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    Beautiful and sad at the same time.

    Now I realise how little I know about the symbolism of flowers.
    killea: thank you so much Christine
    xx
    j
  • Dora
    Blauwe zingende violenbedden klinken hier mee...
    De viool sings the bleus, blues,
    (zie je mijn engels in de knup)
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xx
    j
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