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Redundant corkscrew

door killea

my wine has a rubber
instead of cork
there's nothing at the end
of my angry fork
liquid dinner
fool and sinner
my anger flourishes like
a toxin-fed fire
I have no restraint
no boundaries, no desire
a flooded kitchen
due to distraction,
printer gave up ghost
irate over-reaction?
money overdue
now weekend
to be blue
adrenalin about to burst
bottle half empty
still have thirst
so many questions
afraid to ask
answers all circles
should have bought a cask
there is no relief
mine, lost in rubble
of everyone else's grief
and trouble
damn it, it makes me spew
my wine has a rubber, or plastic
so hard, the bloody thing
broke my 'cork'-screw!


 

feedback van andere lezers

  • marrik
    You know

    You can ask me anything

    But will you get what you wanna hear

    x
    M
    killea: always, the truth is usually painful, but you always put it in such a tering, pleuris nice way. Ha ha
    xxx
    j
  • Dora
    Kom mijn kurketrekker halen, drinken we samen.
    Gedeelde smart is half
    killea: That would be great Dora, two tipsy nut-cases !
    xxx
    j
  • hettie35
    Heel knap geschreven!
    Wens je een fijn weekend
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: thank you Hettie, hope you have a good one too
    xxx
    j
  • kerima_ellouise
    als zelfs de kurkentrekker in opstand komt...

    sterk gedicht Killea!

    groetekes
    killea: I couldn't believe it Kerima Ellouise!
    thank you
    xx
    j
  • manono
    I never buy wine with a rubber cork. It doesn't only break the cork-screw, but the bottle as well!

    Rubber rubbish.

    I understand the anger that goes with the whole operation.


    killea: Yes and one thing led to another Christine
    thank you
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Heel erg graag gelezen :-)
    killea: many thanks Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    looks like you need a scrzewdriver love;-))

    grtzzz
    killea: I do indeed Jan
    xxx
    j
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