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Betere leesbaarheid

Stay with me

door killea

he said come stay with me
stay, for who we are
for the loving
for the dreams
stay beyond the rose's bloom
and we shall float to galaxies
stardust colours your perfume

she closed her eyes
to see what was on his mind
a kaleidoscope scene
threads of gold and silver
shooting from the moon
the sea calling softly
hot sun delicious swoon

he lights her darkest days
his strength
caresses her soul touched
by the graces of the universe
honey sweet for the queen bee
all this and more
opened up for her to see

come stay with me he said
stay, for who we are
for the loving
for the dreams
stay beyond the end of the tunes
we shall play our own drum
and dance through monsoons


 

feedback van andere lezers

  • kerima_ellouise
    schitterend! Ik ben compleet weg van je eerste en laatste strofe...en de rest er tussen in!

    groetekes
    killea: thank you so much Kerima Ellouise
    xxx
    j
  • Dora
    threads of gold and silver shooting from the moon
    danced through monsoons and togetherness
    mooi mooi, een fijn gevoel erbij gekregen
    killea: thank you Dora
    xx
    j
  • yellow
    wauw, this is so feeling strong and a very amazing poem,
    long time ago, but I'm very busy but I don
    't forget

    xxx
    killea: Thank you Marc, nice to have you back
    xxx
    j
  • silvia
    love your poems Killea !
    killea: Thank you so much Silvia, it is nice to know they are appreciated sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • jan
    fun to read...even more fun to ask!

    xxx
    j
    killea: Why thank you dear Jan
    xxx
    j
  • Magdalena
    zo MOOI
    killea: thank you sweetheart
    xx
    j
  • manono
    Beautifyl lovepoem, Killea!
    killea: many thanks Christine
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Wie een leesachterstand heeft kan alleen maar in herhaling vallen. dus zeg ik gewoon zeer mooi June
    xx
    killea: thank you so much for reading me Tessy
    xx
    j
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