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Kiss
still remember the sensation
excitement pulsating
through my veins
you ran to meet me
your piercing dark eyes
smiling, breaking chains
we spoke but few words
on the lips
the first kiss
from those first heady days
nights under the stars
giddy, I reminisce
forever I will savour
recall of the first kiss
my love, my bliss
feedback van andere lezers- jan
so innocent that first kiss, through your poem I immediatly remember mine, it was in a cornfield, we ate sum and then I... and her name was...
xxx
j killea: thank you for the lovely FB Jan
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j - Dora
Ja, die eerste is te opgewonden waardevol om ooit te vergeten.
Zo herkenbaar mooi neergezoend killea: thank you Dora. Neergezoend - what a lovely word!
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j - yellow
nice lovepoem J.
x killea: Thank you Marc
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j - Magdalena
mooi!!! killea: thank you Karine
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j - fairy
Ah, that first kiss, so full of promises...
Wendy x killea: thank you Wendy
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j - marrik
En verder????? En verder????? Vertel.... killea: Thanks M, be patient and I'll tell all
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j - kerima_ellouise
....zucht....heerlijk dicht!
groetekes killea: many thanks Kerima Ellouise
xx
j - tessy
Het maakt mij veel herinneringen levend :-) killea: Great, thanks Tessy
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j - manono
Lovely, Killea! killea: thank you Christine
xx
j
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