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Magdalena

door killea

A complex personality
with personalit(y)ies in abundance
kind but far too trusting
believing in the moonlight
where she wants to dance



her heart the oasis
in the desert of her dreams
she bears her soul
with words of inner sighs
feeling incomplete it seems



a nutcase of the elite
gives her lyrical lantern a rub
her broom ready to sweep
we recognise and know her well
those of us in the same club



sweet fighter of the unjust
know this, your path is unique
all is well, time will tell
be patient with yourself
you'll find what you seek


and he will come and sing
for you, words he composed
to your body and spirit
a rose he will place at your feet
love's circle will be closed



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hVyGTIeSR-E



 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Magdalena
    Amaai, June, dank je!!
    Wat een magnifiek gedicht en... zo herkenbaar
    inderdaad: soort zoekt soort :):):)

    XXXXX
    Karine
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • Dora
    Magda leeft in veel van ons....
    killea: Yes indeed, Dora
    xxx
    j
  • Kat
    Fijn weekend!
    killea: thank you Kat
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Erg leuk
    killea: thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • jan
    very true June, only words can tell...
    xxx
    j
    killea: thank you Jan
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    Lovely poem, Killea!
    killea: many thanks Christine
    xx
    j
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