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Mad about you

door killea



when you leave again I come undone
waterfall welling in my eyes, mascara run
in the jungle of my thoughts search for the sniper
bear my breast for the quick bite of the viper
hold my hand its so useless and unfair
you bound bizarre, my emotions so bare
saw a falling star through the skylight
hold you close to me this last night
knowing nothing can ever compare
to the splendour of this love we share..
when will it stop that one of us must fly
I tremble with anguish of another goodbye
these days of unparalleled awesome bliss
facing days of pining after our parting kiss

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feedback van andere lezers

  • tessy
    Na elk afscheid volgt een nieuw weerzien June
    xxx
    killea: Yes, well he convinced me to go with him so...
    xxx
    j
  • kerima_ellouise
    I tremble when I read this very touching poem

    x
    killea: many thanks Kerima ellouise
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I'm a bit jealous...you lucky lady;-))
    xxx
    j
    killea: luck is a double bladed knife, Jan Thanks
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    Touchting poem, Killea!
    killea: many thanks Christine
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Lost without you.. beautiful poem June.

    Greta xx
    killea: thank you Greta
    xx
    j
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