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Betere leesbaarheid

Remembering to fly

door killea

Want to fly again to my star
the distance doesn't seem too far
memory still hopelessly lost
but fly I will at any cost

here I stand an open book
turn the pages take a look
do you hear when I speak
are my words too veiled and sleek

how often do you give and take
the bough bends until a break
deal with it or go, your solution
will not satisfy you with absolution

here I stand an open book
turn the chapters take a look
another reality tell me what you see
describe it when you look at me

love will not die easily
it's all or nothing loving me
own the courage to see it through
or in truth do what you have to do

when I remember how to fly
I will teach you how to reach the sky
come with me to dimensions you've never been
an ultimate journey eternally serene

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Dora
    Great poem...
    You know the way, and who wants to com along will know it just like you....but not everybody hears your songs...has your eyes.
    killea: thank you Dora
    xx
    j
  • kerima_ellouise
    mooi mooi!

    'it's all or nothing loving me'...een middenweg bestaat niet in deze liefde...

    groetekes
    killea: Indeed it doesn't Kerima Ellouise
    xx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Heel mooi en, misschien kun je me ook het vliegen leren

    Willy
    killea: perhaps Willy, perhaps
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    laat me zijn wie ik ben en ik toon je de hemel, denk ik hierbij :-)

    prachtig June, graag gelezen zoals gewoonlijk

    xxx
    killea: thank you so much Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    I hate to fly, although your poem almost made me June...
    xxx
    j

    killea: well Jan almost is not good enough, will have to write another to take you away, Ha!
    xxx
    j
  • marrik
    The poem is beautifull...

    But............................

    Hope you don't remeber. There's plenty of room for you on this planet.
    killea: thank you sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    Beautiful, Killea, especially the very first part which could stand on its own because it's very universal.
    killea: Thank you for great FB Christine
    xx
    j
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