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Miserabilis

door killea

feel I have lost
the battle with time
my pain is not yours
it was always mine
dreams of splendour
raining all night
on wings of reflection
took lucid flight
body holding on
smell of you still
so much to lose
forever, until…
dawn came too early
to dry up the rain
wait for the torrent
to pick up again
have no dignity
no sense, no pride
inside myself
retreat and hide

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Dora
    This is so sad, sad, sad, to have no dignity no sense, no pride
    inside oneself, but it will come, hope , hope one day..
    one day..I'll fly away...leave my pain to yesterday
    such an old song but still going strong
    killea: Thank you Dora
    xx
    j
  • jan
    painfull poem June, keep the faith whatever may cross your path....

    xxx
    j


    killea: will do my best Jan
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    I wish you a beautiful sunrise that brings you the happiness you deserve

    xxx
    killea: Many thanks Tessy
    xx
    j
  • manono
    The poem covers the title completely.

    What a deep sorrow is hidden in it.
    killea: thank you Christine
    xx
    j
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