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I do

door killea

When the rain falls on
the roof at night
my loneliness ricochets
from the walls
too much room
in the double bed
my body only recalls
your breath on my neck
your hand on my hip
your kiss long, and sweet
prelude to our union
the passion and the heat
though miles away
I hear the beat
of your beloved heart
dreams fade the sadness
of words we had so tart
do you want me still
I send the wind to you
along the shore it returns
with words, I do, I do, I do

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Dora
    Lovely words in the wind, Demis Roussos...
    Yes, I would do it too,
    if I had someone
    like you have
    to dream for and sleep with...
    killea: Thank you Dora
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Prachtig June
    xx
    killea: many thanks sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • jan
    poetry straight from the heart June
    xxx
    j
    killea: thank you sweetness
    xxx
    j
  • jack
    beautiful!
    killea: Many thanks Jack
    xx
    j
  • marrik
    1 + 1 = 3

    Must be a wild strong wind to carry such words

    M
    killea: It was a wee breeze.....ha ha
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    An indian love call...
    killea: Yes it must have been Christine
    xx
    j
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