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Betere leesbaarheid

Not yet….

door killea

not yet tamed
never, comes to mind

though winds carry to heights
along their stormy flights
to discover men's nature
a study in despair

not yet framed
in gilded mirrors to trust

though the sun heats
the body turns to lust
never reaching the inner cold
to melt memories cheap, untold

not yet liberated
amongst the powerful throng

though yearn to sing solo
with a voice always wrong
silence would be golden
if it were governed by a switch

not yet dedicated
to any cause or creed

and every seed I sow
will either die or grow
my care is never enough
flawed in my perfection

not yet forgotten
for what I could not be

not yet remembered
for what one cannot see

not yet…..

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Dora
    strong words in poem of either yes or no
    Not yet, but yet it 's near, what ever it is...
    it's near or will dis apear
    killea: thank you Dora
    xx
    j
  • fairy
    I let silence speak...


    Wendy x
    killea: many thanks Wendy
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Om nogmaals een cliché te gebruiken, een erg mooi gedicht June.
    xxx
    killea: love your clichés thank you tessy
    xxx
    j
  • manono

    though yearn to sing solo
    with a voice always wrong
    silence would be golden
    if it were governed by a switch


    This image-thought I like sooo much!


    killea: thank you sooo much Christine
    xxx
    j
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