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door killea


In the night she did appear
her robes of white glowing
though an apparition
there was no fear

she touched my chest
streamed warmth and love
bent to whisper in my ear
words of the knowing

words she spoke
in a voice so soft and mild
were clear and glowing
straight to my soul

now in the light of day
break my brain to remember
her words so very tender
eluding just when I grasp

but I can feel the peace
the loving solace given
to which I now surrender
recall only one word, her name

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feedback van andere lezers

  • Dora
    Nice fairytalisch delight.
    Perhabs she wispered: thank you for inviting me?
    killea: Perhaps she did, thank you Dora
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Een prachtgedicht, ik voel de rust..

    xxx
    killea: many thanks Tessy
    xx
    j
  • jan
    just like the way you are,

    xxx
    j
    killea: Thank you sweetheart
    xxx
    j
  • kerima_ellouise
    maybe it isn't necessary to remember the words, because your heart understood them and carries them further, inside...

    mooi in deze rust neergezet

    groetekes
    killea: Yes, so true Kerima Ellouise
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    What a beautiful dream!
    killea: thank you Christine
    xx
    j
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