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Love poem II

door killea

You are the silver in my life
tarnished, no matter how much I polish
you are the sunshine in my strife
wonder why it keeps on raining

would sell you for a euro
or give you away for a fight
can't stand you in the daytime
or lie next to you at night

they say love is blind
if you get the right lenses you'll see
your certificate is already signed
by the mortician and me

I hate you

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feedback van andere lezers

  • Dora
    Lets give it a try vefore I die

    You are the darkness and delight
    You are my hope and my star fight
    You are the night and all monsoon
    I will be so with you wet and soon

    killea: Super join-in Dora
    xx
    j
  • jan
    yeah, let's hate for awhile!

    xxx
    j
    killea: come join the fun, Jan, bring your weapons of choice
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    liefde en haat liggen soms wel erg dicht bij elkaar...:-))
    killea: and p(l)ayback time too :)
    xx
    j
  • kerima_ellouise
    just throw it all out in playtime...so love explodes in bedtime:-)))

    x
    killea: bingo! kerima ellouise
    xx
    j
  • Hoeselaar
    Knap

    Willy
    killea: thank you Willy
    xx
    j
  • manono
    Am I following a soap? Caught myself to read chronologically now, in order not to miss any change in between... don't blame me.
    killea: Ha ha - never christine
    xx
    j
  • Magdalena
    amaai, zalig!
    Ik heb hiervan genoten June!
    Het is vrij zeldzaam dat haat zo uitgesproken wordt en ik hou ervan!
    XXXXX

    killea: thank you Karine
    xxx
    j
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