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Rainbow Jewels

door killea

Diamond tears, weeping, sinister arrows hit
what was good and true, invisible as they pierce
ruby-red blood flows, pain so internally fierce
grand prince of darkness tantalisingly unsurpassed
rainbow jewels of lies, definitive web dripping
another fool caught in need of severe whipping
black bird spread his wings lying prostate, to relieve chill
staring at the devil's omen, whilst he warms in the sun
all the undeserved suffering, knowing what is yet to come
motionless, then moving slow, this is no ordinary crow
he flies off circling above, silhouetted by the bright sky
messenger of the dark, departs with primordial cry



 

feedback van andere lezers

  • jan
    scary but at the end of the rainbow lies the jewel...

    xxx
    j
    killea: jewels to temptation, Jan
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    aangrijpend mooi June
    xxx
    killea: many thanks Tessy
    xxx
    j
  • marrik
    Hmm, You are entering your dark period , i guess.
    Beautifull written. See the darknes around you.
    Better times wil come, trust me

    M
    killea: Don't think so, had a big shock yesterday and sadness is the key word...
    xxx
    j
  • manono
    I read a sinister premonition
    killea: And it has hit home!
    xx
    j
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