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The Call
Again I hear the calling
softly, my name just a whisper
inviting, into cooling arms
relief for the pain-filled fever
today, I watched as lovers kissed
holding hands as we used to do
wandering along the beach
as we did today, yes, I too
each in our separated way
the call, the soft call of freedom
for all the past, to be swallowed
forgotten and let to rest
it would be best, dear friend
it won't be long
I will answer the call
and as I fall, may all be forgiven
for given, I have my all
I listen as you call
feedback van andere lezers- jack
Heel mooi met dat vleugje rijm en woordspel. De "each in our separated way" vind ik heel touching. Ik zou er bijna zelf triest van worden. Melancholie! killea: Many thanks for your grand FB Jack
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j - manono
Such a sadness in the two last parts. killea: thank you Christine
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j - jan
superbeautiful!
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j killea: Many thanks my dear Jan
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j - tessy
Ik ben er ook een beetje melancholisch van, heel erg mooi June.
Voor mij een toppie
xxx killea: many, many thanks Tessy for your fine fb
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j - Kat
Voor alles wat ik lezen kan! XXX killea: Thank you Kat
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j - marrik
After the wodka comes the poetry.Or is it the other way around?
After the poetry comes.....
really beautifull. killea: It's always 5 pm somewhere in the world
thank you for the compliment
xxx
j
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