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Punch line

door killea

Punch line...

Sun rises again
a dark relentless throb
silence sought
not found in the mind
blinding, heavy as lead
wanting to get things right
cannot find the thread
what is the point
of lessons so arduous
life goes on exhausting
with every breath taken
dread of another forlorn day
success or failure be damned
feet keep walking in clay
obstacle courses run on
memories of summer delights
climbing each hill of treason
to roll down into the gloom
ever seeking the spark of joy
the moon disappears
following the stars' deploy
dark nights forever call
given the universe's design
anyone else miss
the elusive punch line….?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yfitswQqjKM

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • Dora
    blinding, heavy as lead
    wanting to get
    things right
    without fight
    with every breath I take
    dread of another forlorn day
    success or failure be damned
    feet keep walking their way


    killea: thank you, Dora (I think?) :-)
    xx
    j
  • kerima_ellouise
    treason rolls further, further than the spark of joy...

    mooi!

    x
    killea: c'est la vie! Thank you Kerima Ellouise
    xx
    j
  • hettie35
    Heel mooi Killea
    groetjes Hettie
    killea: thank you Hettie
    xx
    j
  • drebddronefish
    Nice one again june.
    greets
    killea: many thanks Manuel
    xx
    j
  • jan
    don't get stuck in the clay June, try desertsand for a change...

    nice song!
    xxx
    j

    killea: thank you Jan
    xxx
    j
  • tessy
    Erg mooi J.
    Graag gelezen weer
    xx
    killea: thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • manono
    Gloomy universe looking for a punch line...

    Beautiful, Killea
    killea: thank you Christine
    xx
    j
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