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Anger

door killea

Anger


Tell me what you saw in the mountains
I will tell you what I heard in the valley
how many times did you escape death
my murderers too numerous to tally

lost my gold band, somewhere in the sand
never to be found again

anger eats me like a disease
only to be misunderstood
and I will tell you as soon as I can
not that it will do any good

lost my gold band, it slipped off my hand
without a whisper of goodbye

and I
will never find it again…
soul cries flooding rains of pain

tell me what you saw in the mountains
so I may see it too

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • hettie35
    Schitterend June!
    liefs Hettie
    killea: many thanks Hettie
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I know the feeling June, that golden band meant probably the whole world and especially the person who gave it to you...



    killea: the gold band was an heirloom over a hundred years, but metaphorically you got it...it stood for so much more.
    xxx
    j
  • ydm
    anger takes all colours of life,beautifull poem!
    xxyvonne
    killea: Many thanks Yvonne
    xx
    j
  • tessy
    Rakend gedicht June
    xxx
    killea: thank you Tessy
    xx
    j
  • Dora
    how sad,...
    only to be misunderstood,
    in the Dutch mountains
    only to be misunderstood

    killea: ha ha Dora, I have yet to see a hill in hollandia
    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    het ka je zomaar opeens overvallen.....

    groet
    killea: indeed it does Alie
    xx
    j
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