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Inside out

door killea




Dreams jumping time
again and again
to the house in mind
nothing to be the same
doors are locked
in moving transition
am I inside or am I out
exclusion or admission
seeking the riches
once held in my hand
want to feel again
sounds of the steely band
awaken slowly to loss
seek a place to hide
melancholy drift, and find
you sleeping by my side

 

feedback van andere lezers

  • tessy
    You will feel it June..

    Tess
    xx
    killea: indeed Tessy
    xx
    j
  • alie_jankind
    mooi dromerig beeld

    groet
    killea: thank you Alie
    xx
    j
  • ydm
    your poems are beautifull killea, , what more can i say
    xx yvonne
    killea: thank you for the lovely FB Yvonne
    xx
    j
  • Dora
    So you are not alone...
    although...
    sometimes it can feel lonely in a croud
    killea: not with me, myself and I to deal withj:)
    xx
    j
  • jan
    I read you like the back of my hand, nice poem June!


    killea: terrific FB Jan
    xxx
    j
  • marrik
    Wild jumping dreams are not my cop of coffee. I don't dream at all. Well written. (as always)

    M

    killea: thank you M, will send you one of mine! UHM
    xxx
    j
  • Mistaker
    Melancholy and I...

    Greta xx
    killea: and you? thanks Greta
    xx
    j
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