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The last take
Slipping between the cracks
sick with the pain of being
energy gone the fight almost lost
darkness calls, there is no fleeing
so much given and taken away
humour filled with acidic words
smile cannot hide the smarting eyes
never followed the human herds
leaving reality behind
gripped in hopeless despair
she loses the battle once again
this time she doesn't care
every raindrop a perversion
of her inner turmoil of tears
options forever out of reach
it's not the dark she fears
too late for excuses or revision
bare as the Autumn trees
her soul whimpers for peace
no pills could ever ease
those she loved she loves well
there is no doubt in their hearts
ocean deep calls with sweet song
as the count-down starts
she'd like to give it one more chance
but history tells the story
passion and love's threads no longer hold
the promise of any glory
searching for the moment
darkness seems a long lost friend
recognised and embraced
she moves towards the end
closer and closer she edges forward
on the bough that will bend and break
with a last breath she whispers to the wind
this film ends with the last take
feedback van andere lezers- kerima_ellouise
history tells the story, over and over again...love and life, so difficult when they meet each other...
heel mooi, leest meeslepend!
groetjes
killea: many thanks Kerima Ellouise
xx
j - jan
cut..superbeatiful June!
xxx
j
killea: many thanks Jan
xxx
j - hettie35
Ontroerend mooi, knap geschreven.
Liefs Hettie
killea: thank you Hettie
xx
j - ydm
vergeven is zo moeilijk......loslaten nog moeilijker
mooi en verdrietig gedicht
xx yvonne
killea: thank you sweetheart
xx
j - tessy
de waarheid over het leven leert men pas na jaren, en het te ervaren.
Mooi gedicht J
XXX
killea: true, true Tessy
xx
j - Dora
Een doorgaand verhaal,
het weten en verlangen
en tot het eind helemaal
vol waarheden gehangen
killea: indeed Dora, it is often too hard to handle
xx
j
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