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Primal

door killea

Deep in the darkness
he penetrates the barrier
ever pushing forward
he knows no restraint
his mind focused
the body his tool
as he hits the centre
vaguely he hears
her make a sound
a begging so primal
the breath held
forced out
the final gasp, a shudder
as his life force
meets her demand

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• jan
  scream!
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  killea: thank you Jan
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• tessy
  Mooi !
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  killea: thank you Tessy
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• yellow
  amai! knap! xxx een vergaande vorm van penetreren is dat x
  killea: many thanks Marc
  xxx
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• martine
  wauw
  killea: thank you so much martine
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• Wee
  Wow, great poem!
  
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  killea: many thanks Wee
  xx
  j
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  killea: many thanks Ivo
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